A Moment in Time

Check out some fantastic writing from Room 7.  The students thought of a time that they felt excited, scared, or nervous and wrote about that moment in time.

A Moment in Time

I heard my heart pumping quickly.

I heard people saying jump, jump.

I saw a big rock pool filled up with freezing water.

I saw eels swimming around in the water.

I felt like a ghost when I jumped.

I felt people trying to push me off the edge.

I wondered if I could jump. 

I wondered if I would like it.

By: Jayden

A Moment in Time

I heard my heart beating.

I heard the waves.

I saw the nice lake.

I saw the rain zooming down.

I felt excited.

I felt happy.

I wondered what I am I going to do.

I wondered what would happen.

By: Ali

A Moment in Time

I heard the instruments tuning up.

I heard the beautiful Adam!

I saw a violin.

I saw a saxophone.

I felt great.

I felt excited.

I wondered if I would get in the newspaper.

I wondered if I would get on TV.

By: Rose

A Moment in Time

I heard my mom and dad going Poppy don't look down.

I heard it going up and down.

I saw my mum and dad.

I saw the ground below me.

I felt scared.

I felt my heart beating in my chest.

I wondered if I would fall.

I wondered if I would have to jump off it.

By: Poppy

A Moment in Time

I heard my car stopping.

I heard friends calling to me.

I saw lots of tents.

I saw a big field.

I felt happy.

I felt excited.

I wondered how things were going.

I wondered what the next day would be like.

By: Aidan

A Moment in Time

I heard people saying there is a shark in the water.

I heard big splashes from people diving in.

I saw how high I was jumping.

I saw my dad beneath me.

I felt like diving in but I also felt like running away.

I wondered how big the shark was.

I wondered if I would dare to do it again.

By: Mia

A Moment in Time

I heard my brother saying oh yeah.

I heard my mum saying oh no.

I saw my brother pushing me into the boat.

I saw nothing but pitch black.

I felt my self going up.

I felt so nervous.

I wondered if I would fall out.

I wondered if I would get very wet.

By: Brooke

A Moment in Time

I heard the air rushing through my ears.

I heard the engine from outside the window.

I saw the waves bashing on the beach - crash, bang.

I saw the propellers spinning really fast - wow, wow.

I felt the air blowing my hair backwards - woosh.

I felt like going to sleep like Kate did - good night.

I wondered if I would go to sleep.

I wondered how long it would take - I'm bored mum.

By: Ben

A Moment in Time

I heard the engine of the camper van.

I heard the cars behind us.

I saw my sister drawing.

I saw cactus out the window.

I felt bored.

I felt tired.

I wondered if we were there yet.

I wondered if we were going to crash.

By: Eli

A Moment in Time

I heard lots of big words.

I heard that you have to fill the pouches.

I saw that my teacher was very nice.

I saw amazing drawings.

I felt nervous.

I felt excited.

I wondered how do you do this.

I wondered how long it would take.

By: Emma

A Moment in Time

I heard that it started to move.

I heard that it was just about to fly.

I saw out the window that some planes were flying.

I saw that some cookies were next to me.

I felt that I was nervous.

I felt that I was bouncing.

I wondered if I could fly.

I wondered if I loved it.

By: Julia

A Moment in Time

I heard Joanna whispering.

I heard Allie say if we are going to stay up we need some rest.

I saw all the sleeping bags.

I saw Georgina next to me laying awake.

I felt excited it was nearly midnight.

I felt amazed it was midnight and me, Joanna and Allie were awake.

I wondered if I was dreaming but I wasn't.

I wondered if we should have a midnight feast.

By: Frankie